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24 2, 11:25am
Alexius, I'd like to make some suggestions, if you want them.
I'd make silver mug being back into the regular mug.
I'd get rid of red ANNET, she doesn't make sense story-wise to me.
I understand the story even less than not at all since the new story arc, since Captein becomes smarter and everything had a meaning. Seems like a deus ex machina, didn't feel right.
Lastly, we are getting panels with not much information, all leading up to a big expose. Can I have another panel like' #
', something silly, where Snippy gets the short end of the stick?
Anyway, great story (9/10)
(-1 for silver naked mug thing)
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